Sunday, 24 May 2015

Science,27 may 2015

   The one with the soil is 20cm and the one with the cotton 7cm    

Wednesday, 20 May 2015

Reading plan and script


    In class I have been working with ruby and caidyn on a advertisement about a submarine.

   

    


Science, 21 may 2015



    The one in the pot is 50ml and the one with the milk bottle is 110ml.


Tuesday, 19 May 2015

Science, 20 may 2015

The one with the soil is getting bigger and the one with the cotton is growing.


Monday, 18 May 2015

Science, 19 may 2015


it grew leafs it is getting tall and of course the one with the cotton is growing a bit.

Sunday, 17 May 2015

Advertisement poster

WALT persuade by advertising POUTOKOMANAWA

       Success criteria 
  • Opening statement - introduce your point of view 
  • Use good reasons and evidence to convince your readers 
  • Use facts rather than persuasive comments 
  • Try to get the reader interested and on your side - appear reasonable 
  • Fascinate your readers so that they agree with you  
  • Use strong, positive language 
  • Short sentences can help give emphasis 
  • Make the reader think that everybody else does this, agrees or that it will make them a better, happier person, eg Everyone agrees that..., We all know that...  
  • Draw the reader in, eg At long last the ...... that you have been waiting for  
  • Be informative, persuasive and friendly
  • Alliteration can make slogans memorable, eg Buy British Beef 
  • Use humour as it can help get people on your side 
  

Monday, 4 May 2015

Exploring seeds


  What are the differences between the seeds? One is hard and one is squishy.
What do you think caused the differences?one is in water and was not.