Sunday, 8 May 2016

Poem


There was a moon who was lonely

Even though it shone brightly 

But no one noticed the moon

Nobody but a little star

Who comforted the moon every night

Then the moon was happy.

Feedback: I think that you need to work on  making your writing more clear 

Feed forward: I think that you did good on the poem........

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